Creative Spring Writing

Today in class we have been doing creative writing. We had to write a sentence about this picture. As a class we chose the sentence we liked to best and then added to it. Here is my sentence and the sentence I added to.

The oak trees finger stretch trying to touch  the sky.

Under the oak tree, kicked back by the beach from a view, chill going down your spine, the bright sun light on you. The light from the sea shines in my eyes. Fish and chips for dinner. Yum!

Venn diagram- I Wish We Could Play It Again

This my Venn  diagram that I did.

HOW TO MAKE TALO

My reading group have been learning about how to cook talo or taro. Here is how to cook talo.

Musuem Recount

Yesterday we went to the museum when we got there we had our morning tea.

Then we went into the museum but first we had to be into teams. I was with ava’s mom. We had frozen fanterr. It was so yummy.

Then we went into the museum. My favourite part was when the house was shaking it was fun. It was shaking because it was near a volcano. And it was fun playing at the Museum.

My Birthday Yesterday

Yesterday was my birthday. My mum brought me a cake. I was on the september the 21st 2003.  

It was chocolate cake. The icing was chocolate it was big and it was round like a circle. It had pictures on it said  happy 21st birthday Damien and there was an picture of me on the cake .

After the cake I played Grand theft auto 5. It was cool. You can choose these player out of Franklin,Mike,Trevor. I had a great birthday.

Continents Punctuation

We have been learning how to use punctuation in our writing. This is my edited work. The top shows you what I needed to change and the bottom shows the changes I made.

Continents Dictogloss

Continents

A continent is a group of land on earth. Different countries make up  different continents. There are 7 continents in the world. They are the Australian continent is an small continent.  New Zealand is not part of the continent of Australia, but is part of one called Zealandia. There are 36,000,000, million people in Australia.

Cross Country Recount

Yesterday PES had cross country. I was in Te Arawa. We are the red team.

The first kids that had a race was year 1. They were  5 years old. Then after that was the next year group.

Finally it was the year six’s.  At the start we did a sprint and got tired. When I was running I was coming first but then I slowed down. I caught up to Taiaha and we had an race to the end.

The person that came first out of the year six’s was Aidan.Oloti came second.

Then when we finished cross country we went back to class to put up the chairs. Then the bell rang and we went home.     

Onomatopoeia

We have been reading a book with onomatopoeia's in it.
An onomatopoeia is a word that makes a sound. One onomatopoeia is clap.

CYBER SMART

CYBER SMART

Means you can be clever with technology and it was made by Mr Burt. It was made to help us to do the right thing on our netbooks.

The first part is use my brain. Use my brain means I have to listen to myself when my head tells me what to do. If I’m about to play a  game and my brain says “is that the right thing?” I will listen to my brain and stop doing the wrong thing.

Use my heart means listen to how I feel. When I’m doing something bad I get into trouble.Use my brain, use my heart, I’m gonna be cybersmart.

Use my brain, use my heart, I'm going to be cybersmart explanation

means you can be clever with technology and it was made by Mr Burt. It was made to help us to do the right thing on our netbook.

The first part is use my brain. Use my brain means I have to Listen to my self when my head Tells me what to do. If I’m about to play a  game and my head says “is that the right thing?” I will Listen to my head.

Use my heart means listen to how I feel. When I’m doing something bad I feel bad like I might get into trouble.So you should listen to your heart.

To be cyber smart you should leave a smart foot print. That means think about what you say.

My Hinaki

I have been making word families. Here they are.

My Hinaki

I have been reading about hinaki. A hinaki is a big trap to catch eels. Here are some blends I found in the story.

My Buddies

This is my Buddies that make 10. https://www.educreations.com/lesson/view/damien-buddies/23605907/?ref=link